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It's an intense day of soccer practice because the big game is only a few days way. Lynn and her teammates are putting it 100%. Scoring goals, making impressive passes, the usual. There is a new teammate, however, named Betsy Davis. She's pretty tall and strong for a thirteen-year-old--which is why the coach wanted her on the soccer team. Betsy can kick a ball so hard, you'd swear it would break through the goal's net. But Betsy is a MEAN girl. She wants to play soccer for her own personal gain. When she saw how good Lynn was at soccer, she got jealous immediately. As Lynn was doing fancy tricks with the ball, Betsy walked up to her.
"Hey Loud! I challenge you one on one. I bet I could score a goal before you. Or are ya too chicken?" Betsy sneered.
"Ha! Are ya kidding? I never turn away from a challenge. You're on!" Lynn agreed.
So it was settled. As the other girls her doing their drills, Lynn and Betsy were going at it, trying to take the soccer ball from the other. Lynn snags the ball and was about to wind up for the kick then suddenly-- BAM!!!
Betsy kicked Lynn's shin so hard, the bone shattered. Lynn sat there screaming in pain as Betsy smiled in satisfaction. She did it on purpose. Lynn's friends and coach rushed to her aid and called an ambulance. Mr. and Mrs. Loud was notified as well. Lynn's fractured bones in the past, but this was the worst yet. She can't play soccer for the next 8 weeks. And that hurts Lynn more than the leg injury.


WOW! What a story, huh? I swear to you, I don't hate Lynn. In fact, she's me favorite character from The Loud House. But I guess I made this to show that even for my favorite cartoon show, I would like some drama here and there, y'know. And I'm not the only one. I know the back ground is a bit blah, but I tried to go with the style of the show. If somebody wants to finish the story, be my guest. What will happen to Betsy and how will Lincoln and the others react? More sad LH stories on the way.
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Meowmeow124s's avatar

Lynn Loud Crying Emoticon : I don't want to be a big Sister! 😿